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Waiting under the Moonlit night

Posted on April 8, 2010January 21, 2018 by pranay

I stand under the moonlit night
Expecting something to have changed
The light, the night, or just the living
A new view, or the old one rearranged

Yet it was, but the same night
The same, but still glowing, light
And living moved with same right
The silence pressing in tight

I stand under the moonlight night
Waiting for someone to come
She promised me, she would be here
The thought, she wouldn’t, brings despair

Has this been the story of my life
Empty promises, and fake words
Yet i stood, hoping something will change
That to have loved her, wasn’t a mistake
But this feeling still felt strange

And then as if the moon came down
There she came, as if gliding
The face glowing, and a smile escaped
My heart just couldn’t beat

For all my fears, all my pain
Seemed unreal but justified
All my life was not in vain
All the hurt, and anger died

As our hands met
i found myself burning with love
as our eyes came closer
my heart was already racing
as i felt her heart
i gave up sanity in that moment
as our bodies embraced
i knew i had found love
i knew i had found god

I just wrote this randomly, without any aim or intention, without any inspiration. Its just been long since i last wrote a poem, so maybe its unspent poetic energy. Let me know if its good!

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2 thoughts on “Waiting under the Moonlit night”

  1. tulika says:
    April 10, 2010 at 12:15 am

    its nice :)……. but something is missing

    Reply
  2. priya says:
    October 27, 2010 at 10:47 am

    it must be your dream which you want to be come true

    its touching …… but do boys also think like this desperately wait for girl , may be it can be true if its true love

    Reply

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